Alfaaz Ke Zehr

 6 bajne me kuch der aur ufaq me halki si roshni baaqi thi, isi roshni ki khatam hone se pehle Shoib Ahmed apne bhai Najeeb k ghar puhacha tha. Ghar k bahar lagi takhti pe roshan Alfaz pe Najeeb ka naam darj tha hala k najeeb ka ye ghar Kisi waqt shoib ka b ghar hua karta tha aur najeeb k naam ki ye plate shoib ne khud hi lagwayi thi... par ab wo apne hi ghar me ek mehmaan ki hesiyat me tha. Ghar me dakhil hote waqt aur muqrara kamre tak puhchte waqt shoib k zehn me wo saare manzar jin ko us ne dil ke nichle tehkhaane me band kardia tha, roshni ki raftar se unhone dil se zehn tak ka safar tay kia tha... 

Najeeb ka chehra kisi b jazbat se khali tha pr us ki bivi Zartasha ne qadre rukhey andaz me use khushaamadeed kaha tha aur haath milate waqt shoib ne najeeb ki haatho ki kapkapahat ko  mehsoos kia tha... use esa laga tha k ye kapkaphat shayad us ki dil ki jazbat ki waja se  he jo chehre se na sahi haatho k lums se mehsoos ho rahi he .. 

Un se milne se lekar sofe tak bethne ka safar tay karte waqt use pata chala tha k har faasla pairo ka nahi hota... dil k b faasle hote hen jo b buhat dilshikasta hotey hen... 

Najeeb ne baat shuru karte waqt lambi tehmeed bhaandhi thi par shoib ka dhyaan Najeeb ki baato pe nahi balke us k saamne lagte huye sunehri wallclock pe tha jis k uper likhe  sunehri lafz "Home and Family" Shoib ko buhat ranjida kar rahe they aur tab us ne mehsoos kia tha Lafz Home k O wala daayera bara ho raha he wo manzar badal raha he...

Ab manzar badal chuka tha aur O wala daayera use pichle waqt me le gaya tha jab yahi kamra tha yahi log they aur un sab ki tezz bolne ki awaz.... Najeeb aur us ki bivi Zartasha  use saanp keh rahey aur baqol un k ye wo aastin ka saanp tha jis ne un ka doodh pee k unhe hi dasaa tha... ye lafz Shoib k dil me kisi teer ki tarha chubh rahe they par wo khaamosh tha... Alfaaz dunya banatey hen aur alfaaz hi dunya bakhairte hen... in sab me  ek aur b shaks tha, Najeeb ka Maamu jo Shoib pe Ayashi aur karbor k paise ke naajayez istemaal ka ilzaam bhi laga raha tha... Shoib ne saari ghuthi seconds me suljahyi thi pr us  ne koi safayi di thi na kuch kia tha sirf itna kaha tha k ye ilzam ap saabit karden... is baat ka un k paas koi jawab nahi tha... shoib ko pata tha k us ka qasoor kia he... us ka qasoor sirf aur sirf itna tha k wo sotella tha.... Shoib ki umar sirf 12 saal thi jab najeeb k baba ne use apne ghar me jaga di thi   Najeeb us waqt sirf do saal ka tha... us waqt se leke aaj tak us ne hamesha  Najeeb ko bhai mana tha aur Baba k guzarne k baad bhi karobar sambhalte waqt wo ye baat dil me kar chuka tha k wo sab kuch najeeb ko dega us k baaligh hone k baad... Qasoor to Najeeb ka b nahi tha kiyun k us k kaano me zehr ghol dia gaya tha... Alfaaz ka Zehr...jis ki dawa aur marham waqt k siwa kisi k paas na tha... wafadari shoib k khoon me thi par shoib un ka khoon nahi tha aur shoib ne socha tha shayad yahi us ka qasoor tha... najeeb sirf 24 saal ka tha jab us ne apne bhai pe namak harami ka ilazaam laga k use ghar se jaane ko kaha tha... shoib ne kisi baat se inkaar nahi kia tha... koi behs nahi ki thi bs chup chaap sab kuch un k hawale kar k nikal gaya tha kiyun k use ye karna hi tha... use dolat nahi chahye thi use bas family aziz thi, apna ghar aziz tha aur wo ghar hi na raha tha to shoib ne ye behtar samjha tha k wo b is ghar me na rahey... 

Us din k baad aj pehli baar tha k wo us ghar me betha tha aur ghar ko dekhte huye use sab yaad aa raha tha... yaden us ki aakhon k kinare se chote moti baha rahi thi aur wo khamosh nam aankho se un ki baate sun raha tha...

Use wo din b yaad tha jab usi k haatho me khel k bara hone wala najeeb us se tezz awaz me baaten kar raha tha par aj najeeb ki aawaz dheemi thi... 

Shoib ko yaado me gum paa kar najeeb ne khankara tha... 

"To kaha rehte hen ap ab, najeeb ne kaha , kia kaam karte hen?"

"Me ek company me job karta hu aur aur kaam k silsile me bahar rehta hu"Shoib ne apne lehje ko normal rakhne ki koshish karte huye kaha tha... us ne jawab dete waqt najeeb ki aakho ke dekha tha jo k surkh aur bheegi huyi lagti thi... us ne najeeb ko taqreeban 14 saal baad dekha tha tab wo ek 24 sala jazbati nojwan tha aur ab ek 38 saal ka mard tha jis k baalo me halki si safedi aa gayi thi...

"Bhai, Najeeb apne aap pe qaabu na paate huye uth k shoib k paas aya aur bola, bhai ab me ap ko jaane nahi dunga, me jaan gaya hu is dunya me sirf ap mere apne they.. mujhe itni sharmindgi he apni baato pe mene ap ko saanp kaha tha ap pe ilzaam lagaye they... maamu ki baato me aa kar ap se taluq khatam kia tha aur yahi meri galati thi... ap saanp nahi they.. saanp wo log they jinhone mjhe ap k khilaf bharkaya tha par bhai mene b gunah kia tha un ki baat me aa k jis ka ahsaas mujhe buhat der se hua tha... mujhe maaf karde bhai aur wapas aajaye apne ghar me apni family me... sab kuch ap ka aur ap hamare hen bhai me ab ap ko jaane nahi dunga mene pichle teen saalo me ap ko buhat dhundha he ab me ap ko nahi khona chahta", bhai....

Shoib bhi apne aansu nahi rok paya aur dono bhai buhat arse baad ese mile they k Zartasha bhi apne ap pe qaabu na pa aski aur wo b ro di thi... Us din Alfaazo ne Shoib ki dunya bikhairi thi par Aj dunya banayi thi..

Najeeb ko samjh agaya tha k rishte khoon se nahi hotey... mamu un ka apna khoon tha par us ne hi property k liye dono bhayiyun ko juda kia tha aur shoib bhali hi un ka apna nahi tha par us ka dil un k liye hi dharakta tha... najeeb ko b ye baat der se samjh aa gayi thi aur najeeb ne shukar kia tha k kam se kam use samjh aa to gayi thi...

Inkaar Episode 20 Review ( The Delineation Of Social Characters)

Khamoshi tab tak zindah rahi jab tak ziban or khof ne ek dusrey ko baandhey rakha… 

And Hajrah and Shayan eradicated that silence. Their voice is now reaching in every corner of the country, indicating that now fear will no longer be able to hinder them.

Inkaar Episode 20 has brought a new twist in the story and now, one can see the silver lining of justice they can get. They have utilized the power of Social Media well through it their voice, their cry of victimhood has reached at every heart’s doorstep. This thing was missing earlier, I think. Had Hajrah raised her voice on social media during the trial, the story would have been different and the Chaudhry family would not have been able to assassinate Hajrah’s character easily. However, in our society, this step is considered extreme for a girl, yet Hajrah has that courage to go to any extent to get justice. She is not only an individual character but a representation of all those victimized girls who are not fragile. In fact, girls are strong enough to do anything. They just really not have to consider themselves fragile.

Role of Mothers

The role of Rehan’s two mothers are the epitome of two opposite thinking of mothers found in our society. On one hand, there is the character of Naseefa who does not want her son to become a sinner and evil person. She believes in harmony and goodwill. She wants her son to take the right path, the path of tolerance and sanity. She clearly sees that what her son is doing will annihilate him, but she is helpless, she could only make her son understand about the phenomena but she failed in that thing as well. Now she is helpless to do anything because the obsession of love has overtaken Rehan’s senses completely.  She now can requisite her counterpart, the second mother of Rehan to save her son from this dirty game of obsession ere he loses his soul and becomes an animal.

Her second mother, however, does not have the concern about all these things. She only wants her rule as a queen fortified. It is incisive that she only wants to control Rehan and for that purpose, she can fulfill Rehan’s every wrong and right demand. Her role as a queen is described incisively when she says that she wanted Rehan to take his father’s position as a politician.  This thing gives the idea that she wants to remain a queen either as a wife or as a mother of a king because politicians and ministers in our country are considered kings. But the phenomena is somewhat changed now. The video against Rehan on social media is doing its effect to provoke the scorn of common people towards these kings-type politicians and this thing is making Rehan more depressed and insane which could end up in his downfall. It is like Julius Caesar’s Adus Marziye. The time of verdict has come but  has not passed yet! In the end Rehan’s step mother will not  be having anything I reckon, nor husband that is now king or son who is succeeder of his father. So she is about to become a most disastrous and most unfortunate character of the drama, who, in the end, will lose everything.

Father's attitude

One can see clear different of two father’s attitude in saving their children’s from destruction. Where the father of Hajrah (a common man, wants his daughter to win the case so that her soul remains alive. Hajrah is a representation of oppressed girls in our society, and by supporting her, her father wants to give us the message that for god’s sake save your daughter’s soul from death and support them otherwise wolves like Rehan Chaudhry are there to destroy them. And certainly, it is the case that most girls do suicide or take other extreme steps because their father or family does not support them.  This thing has to be changed in our society. On the other hand, Chaudhry only wants her son to live physically; in fact, he does not care about her son’s soul. He only cares about the name and reputation he has because he is a king in our society. Chaudhry is also responsible along with his wife (Rehan’s step-mom) to ruin Rehan, from making him fall in the ditch of hell. Instead of realizing this horrible thing, he wants to make matter worse.  We can surmise the reason behind Rehan’s evilness that is his father’s approbation along with her mother’s tactics. On the other hand, Hajrah’s claim in the interview where she tells about her father’s encouragement throughout every situation is worth appreciating and that makes Hajrah more strong and upright. So the difference between two mentalities of fathers in our society is apparent.

Inkaar- the representation of Society

In short Episode 20 of Inkaar succeeds to elucidate the representation of good and bad characters in our society. The story was started from an Inkaar (refusal) to be exploited, to be dependent, to let one’s soul die, has now ascended to say that  Inkaar to oppression, to the victimization of innocent and poor people by powerful people, everyone should say because (due to social media)Ab Zibaan bhi aazad hai, or soch bhi….  Remember, remain silent against oppression is also a kind of oppression.

Dastan E Yousufi Part 1 By Fayaz Hussain

This is a long Epic Poem regarding the true story of Prophet Yousuf (P.B.U.H) mentioned in the Holy Quran.

I am not a Poet but being a student of literature and avid reader of poetry, it was my desire to write something about the most inspiring, the most motivational story Allah has told us. This story is for those who feel lost, who think that they have many difficulties in their life and their life is not worth living, they are being victim of the conspiracies and atrocities of their own relatives and close ones. For all these people there are many lesson in this story. If Allah wills,everything can happen. Those who are sick, can get remedy, those who are in trouble, can be free from every trouble. Those who feel worthless, can be most valuable, and all this can happen if one has faith upon Almighty Allah.

I have tried my best to jot down all the feelings I had while reading this story, relating it with my own circumstances and believe me, I found encouragement, beacon of hope while reading and writing this story.

Since this is an Epic Poetry and has been written in Parts, describing different events, Part one is presented before you and more parts will be presented in upcoming time.

Kaha yousuf ne dekha hai mene ek khuwab...

They us me sooraj chaand aur taare

 

Sar ba sajood they mere aage saare

Bola Yaqoob sun k bohat khoob pisar 

 

Rehna apne bhaaiyon se mohtaat magar...

Karna nahi un se kuch b is mutaliq zikr

K Tum ho abhi un k dilon se bekhabar

Karna chahta hai Khuda tm ko martaba atta...

Bs rehna tm raazi ba_raza e khuda...

Tha Yousuf waqayi bhaiyon se bekhabar

 Saja rahe they wo b mehfil is mozu par...

Tha un k dil me kaanta yaqoob ki unsiyat ka yousuf ko lekar...

Kar nahi sakey they magar zaahir...

They das bhai bethey soch me gum...

 Kese karen ham Baba k dil se Yousuf ki mohababt kam...

Bola un me se ek k nahi he ye sab munasib...

Kia karna hasad bhai se he Wajib?

Dusra bola dekh nahi rahey tum baba ki mohabbat

 Nahi ho rahi kam hamari un se nisbat?

Kaha ek ne kiya he is ka hal 

 

Bejh den kia yousuf ko maqtal?

Kaha ek ne qatal karna nahi thik...

Chor aatey hen yousuf ko kahin door ...

Phir hoga kahin baba ham pe shafiq

Leke chalenge ham Yousuf ko apne saath charwahe par...

Khelenge ham giyara  khub magar

Nahi leke aayenge wapas use apne saath 

Na mayasar hoga baba ko phir us ka haath...

Khatam hoga hamari hayat se phir Dastan e Yousufi...

Baba ki mohabbat me guzre gi phir hamari zindagi....